There is some effective communication and understanding here on the combination of your main product and ancillary texts. There is also a proficient understanding of the forms and conventions used in ancillary products. Some drafting took place which helped you develop your final ideas. The final products are effective in complimenting your video. ICT used well here.
-what did you learn from your research into comparable products? -the drafting of your digipak as a whole is not very clear, they look like singular images -you comment on Dyer, Mulvey and Adorno and how your digipak product follows them, but don't really state how -drafting of your advert?
There is some effective communication and understanding here on the combination of your main product and ancillary texts. There is also a proficient understanding of the forms and conventions used in ancillary products. Some drafting took place which helped you develop your final ideas. The final products are effective in complimenting your video. ICT used well here.
ReplyDelete-what did you learn from your research into comparable products?
-the drafting of your digipak as a whole is not very clear, they look like singular images
-you comment on Dyer, Mulvey and Adorno and how your digipak product follows them, but don't really state how
-drafting of your advert?